My outline is not one I am proud of just yet as I change my sturcture and placement of info daily but here is my (non-PDF) outline for the wondering observers, I did not do a paragraph by paragraph analysis because that is not needed since my first draft will obviously experiment with my thesis better. Enjoy.

outline

Bibliography

    I have changed a bit the focus of my topic from late 1800s to early 1900s to just early 1900s.  There was a significant amount of information on the early 1900s Colorado River development.  I had exactly 16 primary sources.  I actually have more sources but I am still sifting through their lengthiness.  The sources I do have are mainly from the 1920s and range from all types of articles.  I tried the PDF thing and seemed to have trouble.  So I had to do my best to post the sources by just copy and pasting them =(   The spacing was also off for my sources, but that is just a minor problem.  I have a few news articles and many online articles that were scanned on to online databases.  My Biblio is in a word file below.

BIBLIO